Muscular System Debating

Critical Systems

Hello guys welcome to my blog. We have been doing debating on are writing and we have a different groups. I choose muscular system because I think it is the most critical part of your body. here is the writing that we have been doing and I want some feedback about this writing. I hope you like my jokes.

Intro: Claim

Joke,

Why did a man not cross the road

Because he had no muscles.

I think the most important body system is the muscular system.

P1: Evidence

Firstly, if you don’t have muscles you wouldn’t be able to eat because your muscles make your mouth go up and down.

P2: Evidence

If you don’t have muscles your heart wouldn't be able to pump because your heart is a muscles.

P3: Counterclaim

Some people might think the muscular system isn’t the most critical system. I think it is because if you don’t have muscles you wouldn’t be able to communicate with others.

P4: Rebuttal

Conclusion

Overall I think that the muscular system is the most critical system because

you need muscles to move and communicate. We should make sure that we
look after our Muscular system by getting fit and not eating junk food. also

drinking milk will help you muscles.

Leave a comment if you have a question bye.

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