This week we did a descriptive writing.We had to do 3 paragraphs. We had to describe a mountain. It was hard for me but other people did it really fast. I had to stay in the class at morning tea to finish. At morning tea I finishes it. Here is the picture and writing.
There's amazing fluffy clouds and the sky is as beautiful as a penguin. The beautiful blue
water runs down the hill nice fresh and cold. The trees were rocking in the strong wind.
water runs down the hill nice fresh and cold. The trees were rocking in the strong wind.
I hear the waves crash against the rocks in the river. The beautiful sounds of the birds
chirping makes me relaxed. Amazing wind flows past your body and you feel even
more relaxed.
chirping makes me relaxed. Amazing wind flows past your body and you feel even
more relaxed.
I could feel all the wind past me and feel so relaxed. All the leaves move
past you like a cheetah. The green grass is so fresh that you could smell
it from far away.
past you like a cheetah. The green grass is so fresh that you could smell
it from far away.
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