Every week we do an 100 word count. We have to right stories with exactly 100 words. We had to ad a sentence that we have to put in. The sentence we had to put was. Here is my story hope you like it.
it was heavier than I expected …
I got a job at an electrical place. We put in light bulbs, power points and way
more. One day we had to go and fix all the lights in a mine. We took 7 people
to go to the job. We saw the mine and went inside. When we made it about
5 meters inside rocks started falling from the ceiling. Then this giant gold
rock nearly landed on my foot. It looked like gold so I picked it up.
It was heavier than I thought. I told my friends and they were so shocked.
They couldn't believe it.
more. One day we had to go and fix all the lights in a mine. We took 7 people
to go to the job. We saw the mine and went inside. When we made it about
5 meters inside rocks started falling from the ceiling. Then this giant gold
rock nearly landed on my foot. It looked like gold so I picked it up.
It was heavier than I thought. I told my friends and they were so shocked.
They couldn't believe it.
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