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Friday, 23 October 2020

Descriptive Writing

 Hello Boys and Girls

This week and last week we are doing Descriptive Writing. We are describing someones birthday party. Today I am going to share my story with you. It is not finished but I hope you can give me some Feedback.




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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 October 2020 at 14:41

    hi kody cool blog post i have a question can you do Canterbury swim school next week?

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    1. Anonymous23 October 2020 at 14:42

      Thanks Blake for commenting I will defiantly do Canterbury swim school next. Thanks for commenting and Bye.

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  2. Mrs Cassidy4 November 2020 at 19:04

    Hello Kody.
    I like the idea of putting your story into sections.Well done on including some super WOW words-it makes your story interesting to read.
    Have you ever been to a party that looks like this?.

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